Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Tuesday, June 1, 2021
7 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you showed people the Olympic colours and told people about what those colours mean.
Hey Cordel,I really like this post because of the colors and you have done a lot of writing, great job.
ReplyDeleteHi Cordel,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Neha and I am from your buddy class. I like how you wrote what rings represent what. This reminds me of when my dad was telling me what the rings represent. Maybe next time you should add more detail to your post. Have an awesome 2021.
Kia ora, It's cool how you did a random fact in the corner. Maybe next time you could do something like that add a background or do different fonts, but you do you. What is your favourite Olympic sport?
ReplyDeleteyea thank you for comment but next time dont say next time you should do this bro ok?
Deletehello cordel I thhought it was awesome i didnt know what the rigns represented thanks for helping me learn about it i always wanted to know what the black ring represented now i know its africa thanks for the help bye have a great rest of your day
ReplyDeleteno problem eligh i hope you have a great day!!'
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